WALT: Write a recount
Personal Goal: To improve my punctuation
Things to remember
- Structure: title, orientation, sequence of events, concluding statement or personal comment.
- Punctuation & paragraphs
- Describe characters & places
- Use metaphors, illerations, similes,
- remember to leave a comment
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Within the end of the week I went to my father’s on Friday to Sunday. When my father picked me up we went to my uncle’s straight away to see my cousins. When I got there I went to see my cousin in his room. I said
‘Howde’
After this, I went to say ‘hi’ to my other cousin Anthony. He had so much to tell me like he got a new Nerf gun and what he had been doing.
The next morning I went to stay the night at my cousins, since my dad had to work for the whole day, so I figured I could stay there. When I got there Tanye decided that we should go to the movies. We were going to see ‘Good Boys’ but the only time it was on was 9:30 pm, so we didn't go. Instead we went to McDonald'. Tanye and I walked there. When we got back we started to play games like Minecraft, GTA5 and Call Of Duty3.
The next day my dad picked me up in the morning. We went to Bunnings to find a BBQ, but we didn't find anything, so we went to the Warehouse to get some other stuff. After that we went straight home because my dad had to put the washing out. A few hours later we had tea and we had ribs, chicken nibbles, mashed potatoes and vegetables. At that point my father had to drop me home. So I could to my job at 4:00pm.
Wow! Nate this an excellent post, well done. I like the way you have explained all the things you did and went into detail. I think you could add some similes and metaphors to improve your work. What was the best thing you did on the weekend?
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