Now that their nest had gone, and storm clouds gathering overhead, she was desperate to find a new location to begin building again. It was their only chance to live but there was only one way to live. They had to find the secret apple. The secret apple gave them super powers. So when they set off into bottle lake forest they all start at the bmx track they couldn't see anything but then a big moving shadow runs across them like lightning they did even see the big man's face. So they chased him then finally he stopped in the middle of the forest then he said to them that it's time for the secret apple then said oh yes i've been waiting for this for years then the big man said here it is but you have to be very careful because if you eat to much you will die and kill you type of species. When he ate it all the doors in the world opened and close like they were in a horror movie.t hen the Devil himself spoke and said how dear you do that. Then god himself said do not speak to him that way. Then God separated the Devil from him and said you can talk through this radio. Then the Devil but a mirror in front of him so he could see him self then god said how dear you turn your back to me so God accidentally broke the mirror and then he…
Thursday, 26 March 2020
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Hi Nate,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have written about having superpowers! What was the picture you used as the prompt.
Next time make sure you add the w.a.l.t and explain why some of your words a green. This is where you could write a small description about the task you had to do. This way when people see your work they will understand why you have some green words.
Just a tip, when you copy your work from a google doc, go control shift v, this gets rid of the formatting and allows the words to stay on the page.
Very fantastic job! Keep it up. I would love to know what happens next in the story.