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Monday, 20 April 2020

WHAT HAPPENS TO DOM COME FIND OUT

Quick Write. 

There was a little child called Dom he generally was pleasant until there was a really big jerk hustling his younger sibling for his money.
So Dom went up to the kid to punch him. When Dom punched him his hand got destroyed in 500,000 pieces of skin what happens next ….

1 comment:

  1. Ohhh I wonder what will happen next! The part where his hand splits into heaps of pieces reminds me of the time when Mike Teavee from the original Charlie and the Chocolate factory got split into millions of pixels before landing in the tv.

    I wonder, will he get super powers and get back his hand?

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